EnderMarryMe maimed Boktor with a satisfying grin with its gothic axe. (50 damage)
'satisfying blow' would work
'satisfied grin' would work
'satisfying grin' does not compute
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Head Moderator |
I have more of an issue with the logic, weapons grin? |
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Afraid you lost me hun... The wielder grins... not the weapon... |
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Yea, i tried reading it a couple of times, but there's no way to connect the grin to the weapon. |
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Although you could argue the damage was dealt with the grin instead of the weapon.. |
Administrator |
I changed it to satisfied. |
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Jans try it out then! I can´t :( |
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You dont trust Ender? ;) |
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Boktor maimed The Relic with a satisfied grin with its truncheon. (51 damage) |
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Don´t trust anything until I´ve seen/read/heard it from 5 different sources. |
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That´s 3. |
Head Moderator |
I think it's the use of the word with twice. I feel a strong desire to use a comma to break up the sentence & clearly denote who is grinning in a satisfied way. |
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Better indeed. But i wasnt sure Ender constructed the sentences with fixed blocks. |
Administrator |
It's constructed in JavaScript, so you can read the source. |
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Report from spellingnazi: |
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btw, we only edit the matrix at 13:37, because that's how we role. |
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roll, even. |
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Oh, you have a special skill Jans. You make me smile. |
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Im impressed Jans. |
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+1 for Jans |
Administrator |
Ah, a rare spelling mistake. :) |