EnderMarryMe maimed Boktor with a satisfying grin with its gothic axe. (50 damage)
'satisfying blow' would work
'satisfied grin' would work
'satisfying grin' does not compute
complaints
2011-02-16 05:55:59
[13 years, 314 days ago] |
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Head Moderator 2011-02-16 14:41:11
[13 years, 314 days ago] |
I have more of an issue with the logic, weapons grin? |
2011-02-16 14:44:28
[13 years, 314 days ago] |
Afraid you lost me hun... The wielder grins... not the weapon... |
2011-02-16 14:46:54
[13 years, 314 days ago] |
Yea, i tried reading it a couple of times, but there's no way to connect the grin to the weapon. |
2011-02-16 14:47:47
[13 years, 314 days ago] |
Although you could argue the damage was dealt with the grin instead of the weapon.. |
Administrator 2011-02-16 14:58:48
[13 years, 314 days ago] |
I changed it to satisfied. |
2011-02-16 15:00:17
[13 years, 314 days ago] |
Jans try it out then! I can´t :( |
2011-02-16 15:05:51
[13 years, 314 days ago] |
You dont trust Ender? ;) |
2011-02-16 15:07:06
[13 years, 314 days ago] |
Boktor maimed The Relic with a satisfied grin with its truncheon. (51 damage) |
2011-02-16 15:07:28
[13 years, 314 days ago] |
Don´t trust anything until I´ve seen/read/heard it from 5 different sources. |
2011-02-16 15:08:10
[13 years, 314 days ago] |
That´s 3. |
Head Moderator 2011-02-16 15:13:02
[13 years, 314 days ago] |
I think it's the use of the word with twice. I feel a strong desire to use a comma to break up the sentence & clearly denote who is grinning in a satisfied way. |
2011-02-16 15:31:37
[13 years, 314 days ago] |
Better indeed. But i wasnt sure Ender constructed the sentences with fixed blocks. |
Administrator 2011-02-16 15:33:26
[13 years, 314 days ago] |
It's constructed in JavaScript, so you can read the source. |
2011-03-05 13:50:48
[13 years, 297 days ago] |
Report from spellingnazi: |
2011-03-05 13:51:39
[13 years, 297 days ago] |
btw, we only edit the matrix at 13:37, because that's how we role. |
2011-03-05 13:52:05
[13 years, 297 days ago] |
roll, even. |
2011-03-05 19:56:00
[13 years, 296 days ago] |
Oh, you have a special skill Jans. You make me smile. |
2011-03-05 19:57:57
[13 years, 296 days ago] |
Im impressed Jans. |
2011-03-05 21:42:29
[13 years, 296 days ago] |
+1 for Jans |
Administrator 2011-03-05 23:59:06
[13 years, 296 days ago] |
Ah, a rare spelling mistake. :) |