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Jans [51]
2011-02-16 05:55:59
[13 years, 78 days ago]

EnderMarryMe maimed Boktor with a satisfying grin with its gothic axe. (50 damage)

'satisfying blow' would work
'satisfied grin' would work

'satisfying grin' does not compute


 
dragonrose [34]
Head Moderator
2011-02-16 14:41:11
[13 years, 77 days ago]

I have more of an issue with the logic, weapons grin?


 
Intsecuris [82]
2011-02-16 14:44:28
[13 years, 77 days ago]

Afraid you lost me hun... The wielder grins... not the weapon...


 
Jans [51]
2011-02-16 14:46:54
[13 years, 77 days ago]

Yea, i tried reading it a couple of times, but there's no way to connect the grin to the weapon.


 
Jans [51]
2011-02-16 14:47:47
[13 years, 77 days ago]

Although you could argue the damage was dealt with the grin instead of the weapon..


 
Ender [26]
Administrator
2011-02-16 14:58:48
[13 years, 77 days ago]

I changed it to satisfied.


 
Intsecuris [82]
2011-02-16 15:00:17
[13 years, 77 days ago]

Jans try it out then! I can´t :(


 
Jans [51]
2011-02-16 15:05:51
[13 years, 77 days ago]

You dont trust Ender? ;)


 
Jans [51]
2011-02-16 15:07:06
[13 years, 77 days ago]

Boktor maimed The Relic with a satisfied grin with its truncheon. (51 damage)


 
Intsecuris [82]
2011-02-16 15:07:28
[13 years, 77 days ago]

Don´t trust anything until I´ve seen/read/heard it from 5 different sources.


 
Intsecuris [82]
2011-02-16 15:08:10
[13 years, 77 days ago]

That´s 3.


 
dragonrose [34]
Head Moderator
2011-02-16 15:13:02
[13 years, 77 days ago]

I think it's the use of the word with twice. I feel a strong desire to use a comma to break up the sentence & clearly denote who is grinning in a satisfied way.

Better:
EnderMarryMe maimed Boktor with a satisfied grin using its gothic axe.

Even better would be:
EnderMarryMe maimed Boktor with its gothic axe whilst sporting a satisfied grin.


 
Jans [51]
2011-02-16 15:31:37
[13 years, 77 days ago]

Better indeed. But i wasnt sure Ender constructed the sentences with fixed blocks.
[player a] [verb] [player b] with a [something] with his [weapon]


 
Ender [26]
Administrator
2011-02-16 15:33:26
[13 years, 77 days ago]

It's constructed in JavaScript, so you can read the source.


 
Jans [58]
2011-03-05 13:50:48
[13 years, 60 days ago]

Report from spellingnazi:

"13:37:32 [9 minutes ago] - Shadowfax [95] editted the permission matrix."

edited*


 
Jans [58]
2011-03-05 13:51:39
[13 years, 60 days ago]

btw, we only edit the matrix at 13:37, because that's how we role.


 
Jans [58]
2011-03-05 13:52:05
[13 years, 60 days ago]

roll, even.


 
Intsecuris [100]
2011-03-05 19:56:00
[13 years, 60 days ago]

Oh, you have a special skill Jans. You make me smile.


 
Ecoueses [92]
2011-03-05 19:57:57
[13 years, 60 days ago]

Im impressed Jans.


 
Shadowfax [95]
2011-03-05 21:42:29
[13 years, 60 days ago]

+1 for Jans


 
Ender [27]
Administrator
2011-03-05 23:59:06
[13 years, 60 days ago]

Ah, a rare spelling mistake. :)

It will appear as "edited" in future journal events.


 
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